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 Highly Intolerant Joined: Tue Nov 09, 2004 11:10 pmPosts: 2424Location: Brighton
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My brother has made this poster artwork for his course. It's a theoretical thrash festival held on Brighton beach.
He requires feedback on the artwork. Is the design appropriate for the sort of event, is the logo good etc.
Cheers for any replies.
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Not A Horse Fluffer
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| Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 9:39 pm |
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Spammer Joined: Wed Aug 25, 2004 8:41 pmPosts: 4140Location: The Internet
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Personally I would like to see the crab treading on fat people and maybe eating a few, apart from that it's really good.
Actually, maybe the logo needs a bit of tweaking... looks a bit plain somehow, maybe hand draw it?
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DaveIOC
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| Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:21 pm |
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I like it.
I would probably experiement a little with the logo, perhaps reduce the thickness of the white border a little, as it seems to strangle it a bit, but thats about all I can think of really. The typography itself is cool.
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HavocClaudia
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| Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 11:12 pm |
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I think it looks fantastic, the concept is great and the way the colours blend with hints of the purple from the logo on the crab works really well 
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| Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 9:34 am |
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 Zero ToleranceJoined: Sun Jul 09, 2006 7:18 pmPosts: 6315Location: Landscape XX
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The logo is good but it needs a bit more depth and detail, it clashes somewhat with that absolutely fantastic picture of evil crab  Tell your brother that i'd go to it.
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| Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 12:24 pm |
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I'm going to agree with alot of people, the crab looks awesome, the background looks awesome, the logo looks good. I think horse fluffers idea of hand drawing the logo would work better, but keep it purple.
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| Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:13 pm |
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| Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 6:20 pm |
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| Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 2:16 pm |
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Man, giant crabs are never not awesome.
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Not A Horse Fluffer
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| Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 9:28 pm |
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Bi-planes!!!! The crab needs to be fighting bi-planes.
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YOUR BROTHER IS EVIL AND TOTALLY NOT GAY ENOUGH TO DESIGN THE COSTUMES FOR MY TOTALLY NOT GAY HONEST BIKERDEMON VILLAIN BASTARD RIDERS.
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